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Originally I made this blog to communicate with with my friends I made with in London . I arrived in London at 14th April 2005 and this is my start studying here. I like computer staff and would like to develop knowledge in that field . I am getting some knowledge from my friends who are so much in that field. So I would like to try what I get and put them on this blog which is useful and understandable for non computer expert person besides my personal diary.

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Wednesday, July 27, 2005

British Ramien

Ramien is a kind of chinese noodle which has been popular in Japan, and Japanese people have changed it to their favor.
Today I made a dish of Ramien for my dinner. My friend had brought ingredients, and
I made it more british. I put many boiled potate on the top of it which is staple food here in UK.
I have recieved a parcel from my parents. Contents of it were Japanese rice cake and Japanese cookies. My parents should have known that I prefer western cookies to Japanese cookies. Though I do not know what to do with huge amount of Japanese cookies and they are almost all available in London, I was pleased to receive them.
(Thanks for correcting my errors,Yukko!)

posted by Tomoko @ 5:50 AM  

1 Comments:

  • At 4:25 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Dear Tomoko,
    Just some few tips on your English sentences. I found some spelling error(or maybe it could be correct in Britain. Sorry if that is the case).①populer→popular ②thier→their　③friends→friend(shouldn't be plural)　④ingredients of it →"of it" is probably unnecessary ⑤much boiled potato→potatoes are countable so "much" is probably not the best word. "many" is perhaps better　⑥recieved→received　⑦ I prefer to→"to" is unnecessary ⑧Contents of it was Japanese rice cake and Japanese cookies →if you are using "was", I think "cookies" should also be singular　along with "cake" ⑨sended→sent? ⑩things my parents sent me are alomost available,→ I think you need to write that it is available in London ⑪I was pleased to receive it→receive "them"

    OK. I wrote too long and excuse me for my fussiness. Just to make things clear,,,,I am not bullying!!(this time).

    OK, about me.
    I returned from London on Sunday, and from the very next day, I started work....and it's making me very very verrrry tired....It seems like Sunday was rainy in London. You missed tennis? I will be playing futsal this Sunday.

     

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